Prelim Evaluation

I believe me and my group done a good job on the first piece of video work we produced but of course as this is are first piece of work many improvements could be made. We included a varied range of shots what added more effect to the short film. Many people said the best thing about are video was the music as the music caused suspension. The soundtrack used was Wiley- Morgue (Instrumental) I thought it was very relevant as it was a UK grime instrumental what related to the movie as a transaction for money was going on between youth on public transport (bus). No one knows what's in the bag but its suspected to be an illegal substance by the audience. We could of improved on the positioning of the camera in some shots there was to much space left at the top of the shots we will improve on this in the next production. Also one segment of the short film was to fast as it skipped from one of the characters walking to sitting down with out the segment of the character sitting down. Also we could of improved adding more of a story element to the film but we never had enough time and this was because we had to wait on a perfect shot of a character boarding on to a bus. The story was very basic and there was not a lot of dialogue. However the task given was simple and was just to show that we could use the cameras properly, when we get to make a real production we will be sure to add more story elements to the film what still maintain to be relevant.

I would rate the film produced 3.5 out of 5